Corrections

1. It was the hurricane I seen on TV and, I automatically knew I wanted to help. It was the hurricane I saw on TV, and I automatically knew I wanted to help.
2. I was never so scared in my life. everything went silent, then i started dropping. I was never so scared in my life, everything went silent, and then I dropped.
3. The only thing I disliked about this review is she went it to great detail about the movie. The only thing I disliked about this review, is she went into great detail about the movie.
4. We grabbed the ball off the face off and went down to their side of the quart , I was just outside the 3 point line when I looked up at the score clock and seen there was one second left I took the shot. We grabbed the ball from the face off, and went down their side of the quart. I was just outside the 3 point line, when I looked up at the score board, and saw there was one second left. I took the shot.
5. As I cooked my bacon and fried my eggs I knew I was going to have an excellent day. As I cooked my bacon and fried my eggs, I knew I was going to have an excellent day.
6. The most valuable player of the team is Josh, he wants to be just like Michael Jordan and all the other popular basketball players. The most valuable player of the team is Josh. He wants to be just like Michael Jordan and all the other popular basketball players.
7. I looked and seen Ty and Mark waving. I looked and saw Ty and Mark waving
8. The monster let's out a deafening thunder of a roar, hissing and snapping at my Shane. The monster lets out a deafening thunder of a roar, hissing and snapping at my Shane.
9. Tick...Tick...Tick, its all coming back. Tick...Tick...Tick, it's all coming back.
10. the year was 1964, I was just a young boy going to the new train station going to work for my uncle. The year was 1964; I was just a young boy going to the new train station, ready go to work for my uncle.
11. They should not have been more than half an hour and by the time seven o’clock hit, we knew something was terribly wrong. They shouldnt have been more than half an hour, by the time seven o'clock hit, we knew something was terribly wrong.
12. The only thing we had to eat was the rotten leftovers of my riders supper from the night before. The only thing we had to eat, was the rotten leftovers from my rider's supper from the night before.
13. I heard a crash in the woods the brush was rustling and the trees cracking. I heard a crash in the woods, the brush was rustling and the trees were cracking.
14. ...and yet it has already set out on it’s long journey, in search of where he belongs in this world. ...and yet it has already set out on its long journey, in seatch of where he belongs in the world.
15. Soon I meet up with the only person who’s time I enjoy, my dearest friend Rory, her hair is so short you can barely run your hands through it, but it suits her. Soon I met up with the only person whose time I enjoy, my dearest friend Rory. Her hair is so short you can barely run your hanasd through it, but it suits her.
16. I often travel, I run a blog about visiting un-mapped places. I often travel; I run a blog about visiting un-mapped places.
17. As we put our winter clothing on to head out. I can almost smell the turkey dinner waiting on the dining room table. As we put our winter clothing on to head out, I can almost smell the turkey dinner waiting on the dining room table.
18. I usually don’t agree to go into town because of the fact of how the people. I usually don't agree to on into town because of the fact of how the people stare.

Movie Review: Finding Forrester

The film Finding Forrester, directed by Gus Van Sant, and written by Mike Rich, is produced by Columbia Pictures Corporation in 2000. The story is about a 16 year old African American boy named Jamal (Rob Brown) who decides to try and impress his troublesome friends, by breaking into an old famous writer’s apartment named Forrester (Sean Connery). Forrester never left his apartment, and kept himself locked up, but when Jamal leaves his backpack in the apartment a new friendship happens. When he finally goes back to get it, he sees that Forrester has marked all of his work. Together they form a great bond, helping each other out, but Forrester wants to keep one secret, no one can know he is helping him. The secret ends up causing trouble for Jamal when his professors believe he is copying Forrester because of the title of his writing piece. Forrester changes Jamal’s life, and Jamal also makes a big impact on Forrester’s. The overall story for this movie is very touching and interesting. The given situation is something different and keeps you wanting to know more and makes you really care for the characters. The music in this movie makes a big impact on the feelings and the situations given. Since the music is instrumental it gives more feeling. I believe the theme is “When helping out friends, you must stay true to your word, but only if it is the best benefit for you and your friend; because that is what a true friends does.”